First draft title sequence - Captive

This is our first draft of our sequence, Captive. We used Monday's lesson to finish this rough copy of our final sequence, so we could present it to our fellow classmates, and teacher. We briefly watched it as a group before presenting it to our class, and we noticed that there were a few mistakes that we could easily mend with more time and notice. For example, the word 'photography' in our typography  had been mispelled in one of the text animations. We let the class know that we were aware of the mistake before showing them the first draft. Despite this mistake, for a first draft, it flowed well and we felt we were in a good position, but there were clearly moments for improvement, which were also notified by our classmates in our feedback discussion after they had seen it.